In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and startig universities studies . Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this
It is becoming a trend in some nations that some young adults who are finishing their last year of compulsory education are told to take a gap year to have a job or go traveling anywhere before starting a territory education. Such a trend has its owm pros and cons
It is clear that taking a gap year has some noteworthy positive effects . One of the first benefits of such a trend is that young adults would have the first-hand experience by gaining from work. This would mean that these people might apply those skills in there future occupation. For this reason , they can be more responsible in their work , divide time suitably , handle with the upcoming deadlines . Moreover , a list of successful people states that the reason why some businessmen today are so successful is that they have various types of jobs before . Another benifit would be that young people could establish some relationships with the others by traveling to different places . This might help them be more confident when talking with everybody , improve the communicative skills , know what's what to say.Additionally , having a work before studying in a university could earn them a livings if they were not supported the financial aid by their parents
There are , nevertheless , some drawbacks . First and foremost , working when they are in the young ages may lead to some safety problems due to the lack of knowledge . Students graduated from the high school cannot be backed up enough information . As a result , they could be deceived in multi-level marketing, some underpaid jobs,etc. Secondly , being away from home would cause some difficulties unless they are taught to prepare themselves what to do.Moreover , it would be extremely hard to get back to study after a long time traveling as they become addicted to go anywhere to seek the adventure.
To conclude , this trend is worth considering to have some good aspects in a person's life , however , every trend has its two sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95426829268 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75458945876 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576219512195 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8825180206 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236672226988 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819612708546 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041687582227 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127293296446 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577482710896 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.