In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
leisure time plays a vital role in everyday life. naturally, leisure has powerful influence on their way we spend time with family or friends and its effect is positive.it seems that free time provides enough energy with a suitable source by which they can balance the stress of work and life.The present essay aims to discuss that leisure is necessary for at least three main reasons.
first and foremost, leisure can be beneficial to those people who are tired of the hard works and repetition of daily life. For one thing, there are many activities that help us feel better.For instance, old people prefer stay in, watching TV, reading a book or newspaper, resting, go outside for walking in the evening and most importantly socializing with family and friends.Another thing is that it is good opportunity for young people to do variety activities. As an illustration, they can play sports, go to cinema, listen to music, go to picnic and so on.
second, it is often suggested that leisure activities can improve quality of life. In the first place, it is important for mental and physical health. An example may help clarify the point. leisure activities help people forget about unpleasant things that happened at work or home and just enjoy the moment. In the second place, exercising is the best way to reduce level of stress. All in all, everyone need to spend time doing something fun and relaxing.
The last but not least, leisure seems to enhance relationships between family members. Doctor Smith, the head of psychological department at Harvard University asserts that people who going for walks on the weekend with their wives have a more successful life together. A husband and wife can talk to each other away from their children and resolve their problems. The latest figures released by United National reflected about 80% of leisure activities are a good way for increasing friendship and love among family members. In other words, we can know ourselves and our family better.
To sum up, it can be stated that leisure is necessary. However, the question is: can leisure time improve the health and happinss of human bein in general? only time will tell, but in the meantime, leisure will continue to influence every aspect of every day life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, another thing, at least, for instance, in general, for one thing, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9502617801 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56995009933 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589005235602 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0687063358 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5263157895 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15789473684 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192977002539 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575994964955 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301200527165 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109126455841 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126960810573 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.