In some country owning a house rather than renting one is very important for people Why this may be the case Do you think this is a negative or positive situation

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...f possessing an apartment for people are rather significant . Firstly, in Asian c...
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...tment for people are rather significant . Firstly, in Asian culture nations, One...
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...ome for theirselves to start up a home .if they have not, it is hard to persuad...
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...eir wife-future to accept their marriage ,but some people agure that it is not n...
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... accept their marriage ,but some people agure that it is not necessary house , i...
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...le agure that it is not necessary house , it may be true for some others . howeve...
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...y house , it may be true for some others . however , I still believe that owning a...
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...r them to settle in a new life. Secondly , the day-by-day expenses of living in th...
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...as rural areas is ridiculously expensive . if an individual get the expenses of pa...
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...us problems in their life. For instance, because of food in the end of months or ...
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...get into debt as a result. Nonetheless , there are also the benefits for hiring ...
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..., admittedly, some may struggle to have a apartment for the demand of society and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51178451178 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70012774321 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9501889494 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200521384234 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684234396136 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463856161454 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1210645275 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045795033134 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.