The young ones are tough that hard work is a key to success in a number of cultures. This can have both positive and negative impact on the development of the children and can also effect the character of individual in adult life.
Firstly, let's discuss its advantages. If children believe that working hard they can achieve anything, they develop a hard working personality and will never give up on anything. This can make them successful in their life. There are a lot of personalities in the world who have worked hard to live their dream which seems impossible to many of us.
On the other hand, teaching children to work hard to gain anything may lead to negative impact on their personality. As a grown up, we know that sometimes there are a few things that are beyond our personal limits. Failing to achieve those impossible dream could negatively impact on the children’s developments. Some parents push their children too hard to achieve best grades among all of their friends. The poor kid who fail to come up to their parents' expectation gradually fall into depression. I recently came across a documentary of a girl who killed her own mother who pushed her all her childhood to get better grades. The girl faked all her report card and later when she was caught she killed her own parents. So, pushing children to work hard is not always a right thing to do.
In conclusion, some parents prefer to teach their children that working hard is key to anything they want. This might be beneficial to some extend but this also comes with some drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73818181818 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5488289322 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5782859544 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.4375 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269443998812 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091094630875 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881952929436 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188062117532 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05814575488 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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