It is irrefutable to say that cultural values play a vital role in everyone's life because of various reasons. While some people deem that old age citizens have more knowledge about this but rest of the inhabitants ponder that teenagers have huge information about culture. Thus, i will discuss both side's view points in up coming paragraphs.
To commence with, I believe that old people have more experience, related to culture value. In another words, past generation was totally different from today's generation because they do everything personally in order to that they have more experience about everything, and they relied on local culture so, they always gave more importance to indigineous culture. Even these days, old people, who have accurate education as well as information about culture, teach to youngsters about moral values and culture importance.
On the flip side, in this modern era, everything is available on the internet. In other words, teenagers easily get appropriate knowledge about history, cultural and moral value sans any difficulty because they are well educated, and teenagers have more information about modern gadgets as against to older citizens. Therefore, it is obivious thing they have huge culture values as compared to other people. Apart from that, thanks to technology children easily get foreign culture's values. Nowadays, cultural music and books also are being learnt by pupils at the schools. Which is extremely beneficial for enhancing the moral and cultural values of teenhagers. As a result, youth generation have much knowledge about culture.
To sum up, although old individuals have knowledg about culture. But, I think that in this modern era, youngsters have more ways to learn about culture values and get more information about it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, i think, as a result, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35335689046 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65617225218 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1800257891 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278657215019 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103773267481 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629114039847 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193480253121 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265382151325 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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