Nowadays, crime is increasing with each passing day because of this, crimals have to send to jail. While some individuals ponder that the prime motive of jail only punish people, who commit crimes, whereas rest of the masses disgree with this idea because the think that there are many other thing that criminals learn from prisons. Thus, I side with the later argument.
To commence with, there are numerous reasons that a few folks opine that the mainu purpose of jail is giving a punishment to criminals but first and foremost is that if criminals send towards prisons, then they can feel that why they commit crimes and think that because of this they have to stay away from their family memebers. In another words, they do many works in prisons such as, cooking, cleaning and so on. Therefore, they think a twice before commiting any kind of crime again. As a result, crime rate will be declined thanks to prisons. Apart from this, most of the inhabitants have fear from the name of jail as againts other ways because they worry of losing their status.
However, other people think that jail is not only reponsible to give punishment to other people. If someone commits any type of crime, then government had better make some policies against these type of people like paying a heavily amount of fine. Owing to this, this problem can be solved up to some extent. Moreover, chid learn a lot of things where they live and their parents, who inculcate moral values in them. Therefore, if parents give to their kids, when they do something wrong, then they become good citizens after growing and, they can know the difference between wronf and right.
To sum up, although jail plays a vital role to remove the rate of crime and give punishment to criminals, but I believe that other factor such as parents and government also have a duty to punish some, who commit crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to give punishment to other people. If someone commits any type of crime, then ...
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Message: You used an adverb ('heavily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('amount') instead of another adjective.
...gainst these type of people like paying a heavily amount of fine. Owing to this, this problem ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, while, apart from, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72036474164 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19083794052 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565349544073 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9906026444 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153924915671 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548532850437 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657244663314 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106050586172 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330516694758 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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