Many people believe that young children should learn a foreign language at a younger age which means they should study it in primary school instead of secondary school. Although this idea is reasonable for some reasons such as they can easily to proficient with new languages at an early age, I do believe that this can do more harm than good.
On the one hand, studying a new language in primary school is beneficial to some extent. First and foremost, it is scientifically proven that children's brain at the age of 5 to 10 is hardwired to pick up a new language, thus if children learn languages at this time, they are likely to be proficient with languages quickly. Moreover, as they are young, they will be less self-conscious or shy so they will be confident to speak and don't afraid of making mistakes which is a crucial factor that leads to success in speaking languages.
However, I am of the opinion that this idea is associated with many detrimental effects on children's development. This is because children have to learn a lot of mandatory subjects at school such as maths, and literature thereby forcing them to learn more languages will give additional burden on children. In the long run, this may lead to depression and anxiety in children which affect negatively children's mental health. In addition, at this time, children have to learn their mother tongue to communicate with people around so learning more languages will make them bewildered and cannot be good at any language.
In conclusion, while it seems to me that learning new languages at an early young age is a prospective approach due to the children's ability to access languages, I hold a belief that they should not study too soon as it results in worse metal health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79605263158 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71980399937 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0542025201 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.8 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336127743604 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149058606453 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885201036022 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212140418167 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108472910791 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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