Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin a foreign language of primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, learning a foreign language is necessary for children. Although many experts believe children tend to learn a second language better if they study it in their primary school, some put more emphasis on secondary education for better results. To some extent, I think the drawbacks of learning a language at an early age are overshadowed by the benefits.
On the plus side, there are some benefits involved. Before puberty, younger children are blessed with a critical learning period, meaning they are more likely to acquire a new language. Simply put, the younger a child is, the easier the language acquisition happens. Take immigration as an example; if an individual emigrates as a young child, they are more inclined to become fluent in the target language. Additionally, as a child grows up, the affective filter, dealing with a lack of motivation and self-confidence, develops. In secondary school, children are more obsessed with their mistakes, hindering the process of language acquisition, and since this process is full of error commitment, younger children can cope with it more effectively than their older counterparts.
However, the disadvantages cannot be ignored. The most axiomatic argument is concerned with the level of pressure that is connected with learning a second language, which children generally cannot withstand. Not only do they have to learn their native language, but also learn new concepts like math. Moreover, the importance of other subjects to be fully learned is no comparable to second language acquisition, say, science, which is viewed as a core subject worldwide.
To recapitulate, despite the controversy surrounding the best age of second language learning, I believe due to chief reasons as in the natural talent of every child to acquire a foreign tongue and being less sensitive to their errors, the positives outrank the negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, the positives outrank the negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37123745819 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94547642437 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578595317726 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5831151606 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23388541967 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078404051457 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094914348754 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144541717332 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121230703935 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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