Some Museums and Art galleries charge admission fees,while,others have free entry.Do you think advantages of free admission outweighs the disadvantages.

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...free entry to museums and art galleries.To start with,it acts as a source of great...
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...to the visitors;As plethora of artifacts,sculpturesrelated to historyand many more similar stuff i...
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...isplayed for visitors to gain knowledge.The knowledge leads to enhance the command ...
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...two particular subjects:History and Art.So,should visitors and tourists be allowed...
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...t opportunity more frequently than paid.Thus,it makes more crowd willing to attend t...
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...portunity more frequently than paid.Thus,it makes more crowd willing to attend thes...
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...of any precious artifacts or sculptures.Therefore,these type of problems are one of the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, it is true, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69034090909 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.83762025514 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599431818182 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.923361442 49.4020404114 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 286.142857143 106.682146367 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.2857142857 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.1428571429 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187357874147 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913081895119 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686315267824 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981545661803 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608073095115 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.5 13.0946893788 233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

do you think i had used punctuation like comma unnecessarily?