Some parents believe that reading entertainment books is waste of time. In their opinion, children should read only serious, educational books. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own experience.
Education is a powerful weapon which we can use to run this world on a progressive track. Similarly, an individual can acquire education from distinct ways such as by reading books, newspaper and much more. One of the most controversial issue today leads to that, children should not be allowed to read entertainment books; according to some parents. I completely agree with the given topic, and give reasons for my answer through some assertions and examples in the further piece of essay.
The first step to understand that, why parents think that reading entertainment books is waste of time? The first prominent reason is, some parents believe that if children will read those books than there will be huge impact on there academic studies. They say that, children can get distracted from there studies and they will gain fewer marks in academics result. However, children love to read stuff which is either any action or drama story in the books, they get fascinated towards them and start behaving similar. Hence, that is why some parents feel that, concentration of children can be vanished from serious studies which is highly beneficial for them to adapt.
The second foremost reason is, nowadays, if parents allow their child to read such books then they get addicted towards them. Children find these books interesting and when parents ask them to leave than they get aggressive which makes parents think to not let them read those books again. Likewise, no parent want their child to be stubborn, but when children get attracted to such stuff once it is hard to make them understand that this is not beneficial. A good illustration is, it is recently shown in schools survey that 70% of children are getting low marks and becoming aggressive by watching such cartoons and by reading stuff full of actions and drama.
All in all, As we all know that children are Innocent and adapt new things rapidly. So, it is duty of parents to take care of their children that they are acquiring appropriate knowledge which can be helpful for them in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun marks is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...d from there studies and they will gain less marks in academics result. However, chi...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_AND_ALL[1]
Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all in all' (=after all, nevertheless)?
Suggestion: All in all
...ing stuff full of actions and drama. All and all, As we all know that children are Innoc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, second, similarly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49411609441 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541310541311 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6750713121 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288175582477 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10528792347 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560889128352 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173325883895 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069450717677 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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