Many parents believe that children should read only educational books and not entertaining books because such books only waste their time. In my opinion, a child should read both as education books impart necessary knowledge, but entertaining books play as they play an important role in the development of a child and helps parents and teachers to give essential moral lessons.
Firstly, entertaining books teaches pivotal life lessons of which educational books are devoid off. An entertaining book in a form of a story of a character to which children can relate to and, therefore, learns on their own. These lessons are related to the personal sphere of life and stay with the person for the whole life. Eventually, it helps parents and teachers to coach children with ease.
In addition to that, entertaining books provide the necessary break from the high brain utilization tasks. Reading educational books in break may not prove helpful but rather put more strain on the brain. Whereas, entertaining books always help in recouping from the stress. Children who read entertaining books perform better in the exams.
Finally, reading of entertaining books aids in the development of the brain. Since it induces children to imagine, they broaden the horizon of a child at a very tender age. This, in turn, increases the creativity and, consequently, aspires them to opt for the unique career path. Many of the great artists from the various fields claimed that they were inspired by their childhood superheroes.
In conclusion, entertaining books is not any less important than educational books as they teach the important lessons of life which result in the growth of a child.
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 65
- Some People think that team sports prepare children for work life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it by examples. 36
- Some People think that team sports prepare children for work life Discuss both sides and give your opinion 90
- Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...spired by their childhood superheroes. In conclusion, entertaining books is not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17090909091 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76335883774 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534545454545 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.020098662 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298617462098 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110183933776 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887726144654 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16820120073 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090198750428 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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