Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
All the children have a great appeal to play with toys. They love to play or spend time with their toys. Some parents purchase their children a large number of toys so that they can earn educational knowledge as well as mental pleasure. On the other hand, it has some negative consequences, for example, it will also hamper their study and reduce their outdoor activity.
The educational toys have a great impact on the mental growth of children. For instance, when I was a child, I played with a toy in which the English alphabet was written, and I have to match the latter with the English word. It helps me to learn not only the English letters but also helps to introduce with words which is helpful for our English communication. Thus, these toys help me in my cognitive development.
On the contrary, parents who bought their children any types of toys whenever or whatever they want has a negative impact on their mental growth and behaviour, and also hamper on their study. To illustrate, parents who bought their children video games have a negative effect on their study. They always play video games as it is addictive and do not study properly. That's why, they also don't want to go for outdoor activity, like play with friends or cycling. As a result, due to lack of physical activity, it will effect on their health.
To sum up, although toys have the educational impact on a children's life, it has also many drawbacks. So, parents should buy toys for their children which is helpful for their mental development, but keep in mind that it will be limited to a certain number not too much excessive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s. Some parents purchase their children a large number of toys so that they can earn educational ...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...is addictive and do not study properly. Thats why, they also dont want to go for outd...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ot study properly. Thats why, they also dont want to go for outdoor activity, like p...
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Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...e to lack of physical activity, it will effect on their health. To sum up, although...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66783216783 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48137716349 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482517482517 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5483894332 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415079441244 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14004334752 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823998890641 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265440826919 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076591759448 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.