Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Theseday, with the growth of the economy, personal incomes rising leads to parents open-handed with their children by paying for plenty of toys. Although this problem can result from loving parent for their kids, it also have had pros and con.
On the one hand, toys currently contribute to ameliorate feelings and independent ability for children.
In fact, in modern society, married persons spend most of their time on earning profit, which makes them impossible to play with their children and let them alone. By playing with toys, children would feel good and prevent to negative emotions. Besides, the majority of toys are currently designed as miniature models that are household items or technology devices. As a result, children are able to learn how to use the real things when they grow up, which makes it easier for youngsters to solve problems by themselves.
On the other hand, owning numerous toys would create some undesirable traits such as having no respect for property and how to reject. Obviously, people would quickly forget their old items when they have a new one, and children have the same things. That is a reason why children often do not use the old toys and finally a lot of those have been dumped, which would form a wasteful personality in the future. Moreover, if parent always buy every things that their kids requires without rejection, children would not be able to deny demands from the others when they matures.
In conclusion, parents can buy toys for children as a way of showing love, but they need to set boundaries and restrictions. This is because toys not only serve as a supporting assistant life for children, but also are able to build some bad characters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mature'
Suggestion: mature
... deny demands from the others when they matures. In conclusion, parents can buy toys f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4773144333 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7348795153 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311380974779 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11621447108 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362422125156 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181479225196 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294078385325 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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