In some part of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do
this? Is it a negative or positive development?
In this day and age,more and more attention has been placed on conducting research into family history . There may be compelling reasons for this trend; however, from my perspective, this notion will have more detrimental effects on people’s lives than positive ones.
It seems that people have this tendency due to two primary reasons. First, the curiosity about the ancestors stimulates young people to explore their family historical background. They may want to have knowledge of their ancestors’ social class in the past ; for example, knowing that their great grandfather belongs to a royal family can make them proud of their family. Second, conducting research about the origins of the family can serve medical purposes.It is undeniable that people want to be conscious of the disease they might inherit from their ancestors.
However, this trend would have some adverse effects. First, in spite of medical purposes, research into the family history can be a waste of time and money. It is a fact that people have to travel to numerous places as well as ask a large number of people related to the past of their family for information, which is unnecessary and time-wasting. Instead they should focus their resources on working or study as well as taking care of their present family. Second, it will affect the offspring pessimistically.To illustrate, if their ancestors were criminals, they would have a sense of embarrassment and lose their confidence.
In conclusion, due to the aforementioned negative effects, I hold a firm belief that young people should not do research into their family history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20689655172 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84923593477 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2252286625 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196200624033 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832353853943 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485869218678 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137248848629 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266120887034 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.