The issue as to whether the leader's ability is native or training hard has remained a source of controversy.Some arguments resist that Some people are born or inherited personality traits from parents will become a real-life leader,whlist, The efforts day by day is a provement for a normal person to be successful. In my opinion, good leadership is a combination of both natural and persistent abilities.
On the one hand,Those who feel that leadership is a characteristic since people was born with might argue because of several reasons.Some soft skills such as interpersonal skills, analytical skills or thought-provoking will be formed in a long time that these become flexible. But those abilities are being occured in some youngsters as soon as possible, even if studied at primary school show practical skills immdiately and clearly. In among arguments, they resist that Great leadership must have optimism, energetics to motivate others and master all of skills they have. Those giving opinions are symnonymous with The flexibility and sharp thinking play an important role in emgergencies at an office or companies. Furrthermore, Real leaders must possess inborn charisma. Most of presentations, conferences or workshops, which have the absencce of properous businesses or experienced experts, the ability enable leaders appeal those people and decide whether a key role for the success and commit themselves for an international organisations.
On the other hand, I would totally side with those who think that leaderships can be trained over time . With the high sense of resourcefulness and dísciplines, which can be definitely through one's childhood up-bringing, may able to be developed through experiencing and mentoring.This allow them to boost the enhancement of brain and show all latent characteristics during the period shown. Furthermore, The credibility of a creative leader must be expressed through time and experience.For instance, it is unreasonable for a trainee to complete a excellent project without the support of their counterparts or instructors. Thanks to those processes, they can broaden the knowledge and save some experiments and apply not only their expertise but can also challenges in other range of fields, which can apporopriate with ability.
In conclusion, the possibility of leader can be the attributable to the nature and training over time, Great leader are dependent on training, experiencing and a part of native but there would be a undeniable fact that there are some people born without natural leadership skills that can still become a true leader in the future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
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Suggestion:
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Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the presentations') or simply say ''Most presentations''.
Suggestion: Most of the presentations; Most presentations
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Suggestion: organisation
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...hat leaderships can be trained over time . With the high sense of resourcefulness ...
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Suggestion: challenge
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Suggestion:
..., which can apporopriate with ability. In conclusion, the possibility of leader...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42401960784 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29028864484 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7439793784 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.230769231 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3846153846 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334791432503 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111603825805 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659998537382 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217828509766 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474326148199 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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