Some people are born other believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give your opinion
t goes without saying that leadership is of utmost pivotal ideal skill, which can not be superseded by any other means. Nevertheless, whether it is acquired by dint of gene or practicing has elicited controversial issue. From my perspective, enhancing leader skill via meaningful lessons undeniably outweighs availability one.
On one side, it is noteworthy that administration gene plays an indispensable role in nurturing individuals' personality. It is doubtless those fostered by strict initiative parents accumulate appropriate schedule as well as creative interpretation. On top of that, it can be confidently conveyed under few circumstances do characteristic belonged to genetic system be converted and replaced. This claim is substantiated by common incidents parents gain remuneration as a boss stand high likelihood of being model to their children to follow. Aspirations accompanied by expectations are also placed on them.
Notwithstanding view mentioned, it is vital citizens ameliorate management ambition via trying with significant efforts. Teenagers not applying prominent background does not mean hardly boost skills. It can be restated that perseverance, which is considered as stimulus for success, is a powerful tool as brave adequate to challenge themselves in pursue of targets. Parallely, by the same token, initiative skills such as taking over associated with dividing up tasks are cemented gradually. By contrast, according to surveys genetic characteristics are feasible to disappear without practicing. Experiences towards failure catalysed such a surge in strengthening personality.
In light of aforementioned analysis, not only gene but also trying hard result in leadership. I am in consummate accord with the recommend people keep learning via experience instead of being indifferent as well as lazy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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t goes without saying that leadership is ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...dership. I am in consummate accord with the recommend people keep learning via experience ins...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, such as, as well as, by the same token, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83271375465 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49260017274 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721189591078 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1342686907 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125885182465 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317822199261 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447893075395 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729042059834 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171883548906 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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