Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops.
Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.
The improvement of technology has brought significant alterations to our lives, benefiting people from more convenience and pace. As a result, some people are inclined to purchase the cutting-edge instruments such as gadgets, phones and laptops to be as up-to-date as possible. Although there are positive aspects to this new trend, I would contend that drawbacks are more considerable.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that buying new technological products have undermined conventional face-to-face communication. The more people spend time browsing on the internet and acquiring information just in the blink of an eye, the less they would find the opportunity to be in touch with their beloved ones. Being alien to the real world, modern people face negative feelings such as loneliness which culminates in serious mental disorders and social isolation.
Further and more importantly, though, a materialistic approach has been taken to the life by purchasing new-brand technologies to excess. Admittedly, these products have brought about more convenience and pace in modern lifestyle which is positive, undoubtedly. Nonetheless, the competition which is held according to the belief that money is a pivot through which happiness and respect turn, is more detrimental. Having the privilege of providing the newest electronic goods, just a minority of society enjoys this new trend, while others are warranted to make a lot effort to keep up appearances.
By way of conclusion, given the consequences associated with this trend, I believe that being into buying up-to-dated tools would hurt people’s communications and happiness. The consequences will grow if more people adopt this approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nonetheless, so, while, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62068965517 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22278025792 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4816492027 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142972462833 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541379816531 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360861862619 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935503418077 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375735908928 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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