Some people are of the opinion that hosting an international sports event is good for the country. However, some others are opposed to this idea, claiming that it is bad. Taking part in hosting an international sports event is common in many countries. For my perspective, oganizing
an international sports game is bad
some people are of the opinion that hosting an international sports event is good for the country. However, some others are opposed to this idea, claiming that it is bad. Taking part in hosting an international sports event is common in many countries. For my perspective, oganizing
an international sports game is bad
hosting an international sports event has been commly consider as an occasion for proving and improving people's heath. National athletes will participate in this event and try their best to become the champion. In addition, amature athletes consider this as a place for them to experience and promote their health. besides, the country which oganize have many profit from the event. For example, there will be more foreigner and tourists coming from a lot of place . thanks to that the economy of the country will be raise.
On the other hand, there are some sector making money like restaurants, hotel, tourist atractions and sport merchandising. The ciztizens there can not have any benefits. All of the money from the event will be give to charity oganization and other public activities . On the contrast, too many people raise traffic congestion in this country. Moreover, the number of trash will get bigger and bigger.
In conclusion, my firm conviction is hosting an international sports event which is bad for the country. In the future, i hope there will be more advantages for the country and its disavantages will be improved
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...besides, the country which oganize have many profit from the event. For example, there will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0622406639 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78810152894 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535269709544 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7714028346 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.586894806377 0.244688304435 240% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188265951532 0.084324248473 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192991246988 0.0667982634062 289% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373550776634 0.151304729494 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.229413525409 0.056905535591 403% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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