Some people argue that capital punishment is good for country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although many countries have a capital punishment as their policy, there have been recent calls to Indonesia takes the same choice. In my opinion, I believe that the capital punishment has many bad effects for several reasons.
To begin with, the main reason is that the capital punishment would give inequity for civil society’s life. These days, there is a huge pressure from people, largely from social media, for government take an action for capital punishment policy in Indonesia. Therefore, this punishment considers people to be careful in criminality if Indonesia government implements it. The fact that capital punishment is generally inequity for human rights.
A second reason I disagree in extreme punishment is that it will be used by some people in outstanding economy and power to pressure others. Laws should be give/given safety for a whole civil society, neither high economy nor low economy. This equality is important in a world where people are coming from different social status.
Turning into other side, people in crime are able to have a chance to be better people. However, all people in the world had sins and faults, but a death punishment makes people cannot correct their faults. Moreover, its condition opposites rules of human rights that all of people have an equal chance to better life.
To conclude, I believe that capital punishment is not essential for a number of reasons, both practical and law’s equality. If people want to punish others, they have plenty choices of punishment except death, for example prison for a whole a life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14671814672 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57883844318 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.9752040198 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282687917244 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105462154189 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486246173605 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161392953159 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442826491992 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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