Some people argue that historic building should be preserved in their original forms. Others argue
that this is both inadvisable and impossible.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
History is the past of every nation and it reflects the way our ancestors lived their lives many centuries ago. While some people think that historic monuments should be preserved in their authentic forms, others are of the opinion that this is unnecessary and almost impossible.
It is certainly true that people must do their best to save the historical heritage and give an opportunity for descendants to learn history, to feel themselves as a vital part of it and to be proud of. That is why governments should keep in the best conditions historic buildings such as Stonehenge in the UK, the pyramids of ancient Egypt, and monuments of Maya civilization in Mexico. Moreover, these monuments can bring some benefits if tourists will have to pay for visit such great and encouraging places.
However, there are other factors that may affect some people to think differently. Firstly, restoration and renovation bills are supposed to be at a very high level, and this will obviously impact all taxpayers. In addition, some people believe that the budgets spent on historic buildings should be spent on other social projects such as healthcare. Secondly, visiting historic buildings is not always too safe and even can lead to dire consequences such as injuries.
In conclusion, I believe that although historic buildings should be protected and preserved for the next generations, restoration costs must be wisely regulated by governments. Furthermore, some historic buildings such as palaces may be rented to rich people for solemn events and even become an important source of replenishment for Treasury.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21923076923 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87777393835 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8854086337 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.363636364 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305747938742 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118689336893 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950062466345 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190984839322 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492456695101 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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