Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary brings to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Not everybody can have both an enjoyable experience and a good salary at work. many have to choose between the two. some opt for the former while others are adamant that the latter matters more. My own viewpoint is that money, as important as it is, loses its meaning at a certain point and most people would need a lot more than their wage to enjoy a great life.
On one hand, we all need to pay bills, to support our families, to have hobbies and for some, to afford the finer things in life. so naturally a better paid job will generally result in higher quality of life, at least materialistically. Besides, most societies also attach a lot of status and significance to one's salary so if you make more money, people tend to respect you more and that will open up new opportunities not just financially, socially but even romantically.
On the other hand, we don't exist solely to make money. A job is, after all, a job. We contribute to society in exchange for monetary compensation but at the same time we also have other dreams, ambitions and values to uphold. Even if a job pays well but forces us to harm others or compromise our principles, I am certain that many, myself included, would rather not do it.
Overall, I firmly believe that while a good salary is a big factor contributing to our general wellbeing and happiness, it's certainly not the most important one and there many other aspects that we need to take into consideration to be able to live a truly happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, well, while, after all, at least, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54074074074 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.642576371 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2501441752 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275151805511 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964485829581 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542096665838 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163493255962 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876988186834 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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