Some people argue that sports are essential for us, other believe that sports as an activity for leisure time.
Discuss the both and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there has been a positive trend that sport has gain popularity in society. It is plays a dominant role in society, whereas, some section of society deem that it is free time activities. However, I will discuss both the points in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, many people believe that sports game are significant for the people. There are ample of reasons behind this phenomenon. The most remarkable reason is if people play sports games then they should active, such as, during sports games people do many physical activities, it is helpful to live fit as a fiddle. The another reason is people should learn group activity, how to manage time and how to communicate to others. They learn leadership skill, time management skill and so on. Particular person can make their career in this field as football player, cricket and many more.
On the other hand, in the some part of the world people believe that sports games are play during free time, it is not daily activities. There are few reasons behind this. The main reason is majority people have their own responsibilities to fulfill. Such as, taking care or their families, children education. Parents medical uphold and basic household things. According to these they should do job for earning. Apart from that, some people think that firstly they want to set their life archive their goal, thy believe sport games are not a main source of income that the reason they prefer to pay according to their free time.
Therefore on the basis of all the points discuss and my personal experience as well. I would like to state the conclusion that paying sports games are great development for the children and other age groups people because it is teach most important skill, which is very essential for good living on the earth is decorum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to group'
Suggestion: to group
...e another reason is people should learn group activity, how to manage time and how to...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...any more. On the other hand, in the some part of the world people believe that s...
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Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... set their life archive their goal, thy believe sport games are not a main source of in...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...to pay according to their free time. Therefore on the basis of all the points discuss ...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...d other age groups people because it is teach most important skill, which is very ess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88349514563 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41793707663 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8624070308 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275544423113 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772633853676 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776556181962 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169214629385 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253469339231 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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