The topic of whether the advertisements deliver useful information of a product is of concern for many people. Some believe that advertisements help customers to choose the best items, while others have different opinions. As for me, I strongly agree the former.
Those who assert ads hold the following reasons. Firstly, it is an ideal platform for customers to get access to the information of a product. As many companies or factories present the functions and characteristics of their best sellers via adverts, customers have the chance to know if these products satisfy their needs. Secondly, advertisements can always reach a large number of audiences. Advertising messages can be transmitted through mass media, such as newspaper, magazines, television, allowing the general public to be aware of the existence of any new products.
However, there are opposing voices. To start with, it is common to find that many adverts convey fake information. In order to persuade people to buy goods, some advertisements do exaggerate and distort the truth, which can be considered as a fraud. Besides, the commodities are generally getting more expensive due to the heavy advertisements. For example, once a product is highly promoted, it becomes a luxury as it is well-known. In this case, the company will raise its price to maximise the profits.
I personally agree that the advertisement have a certain value in the current market. It is no doubt that the widespread advertising has revolutionised people’s shopping behaviour. By reading the magazines or watching the TV ads, shoppers can acquire the latest promotions and on sale news, thereby purchasing the suitable items for themselves. Although there are negative sides on this trend, the adverse impacts can be controlled by the government with the imposition of censorship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...condly, advertisements can always reach a large number of audiences. Advertising messages can be ...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...er, magazines, television, allowing the general public to be aware of the existence of any new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for example, no doubt, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13179670296 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646048109966 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7158642863 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145232117021 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040440114924 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533573629582 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927559736508 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606400760627 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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