Some people believe that the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs.Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.Discuss both views with your perception.
Education being the third eye of human beings set the foundation of a successful career for them.Presently, some masses ponder that the sole purpose of varsity education is enable the degree holders to acquire prestigious jobs.However,others assert that it offers broader prospects for both the pupils and the communities as well.Here, I would discuss both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold reason to support the former view.To begin with, academic qualifications are a compulsory requirement in most of the professions these days.For example, it is important for prospective candidates to become teachers, doctors or lawyers without having relevant degrees in hand.As a result,studying at universities definitely opens up numerous Avenues for better employment opportunities.In addition,the job market is quite competitive and there are hundreds of applicants for a single vacancy.Hence, young people with optimum degrees can successfully secure lucrative jobs for themselves.
Now there are various points to shore up the latter view. Initially, pursuing higher education positively help the students to enhance their overall social skills.To justify, while studying, pupils try to get along with their fellow mates who are from different backgrounds in order to create a positive rapport. Hence, their maturity and confidence will grow and improve them as a person.Furthermore, graduates can make a considerable contribution to the society once they are done with their academics.To illustrate, many of them will work in multiple professional fields sach as medicine, education,accounting and so on which are consequently indispensable for the overall prosperity of the nation.
From my notion, both aspects have their own significance. Undeniably, university degrees certainly play its role in assisting students to get jobs. However, i still believe there is a bigger picture of positive outcomes that come along when youngsters pursue professional qualifications.Such education is phenomenal to refine individual characters and upgrade the society as a whole.
To recapitulate, though people have distinct views about the role of university studies but the fact is that it is advantageous in a much lucrative way to both the masses and the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, third, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74631268437 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50309361605 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6401179941 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.54142462 49.4020404114 349% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.444444444 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.6666666667 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306611101781 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103085940892 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585468055921 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152603852765 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485905388484 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 50.2224549098 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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