Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses of the world's fuel resources to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Submitted by Patel Romaa on Tue, 07/27/2021 - 05:28
Irrefutable, in this modern globalization generation uses airlines for their for farthest places, Thus many people think that traveling by airplane and helicopter should be restricted because it a plethora of drawback to using these devices and is also the major problem is global environmental pollution. so I think that at travel not fully decline but used while the necessity.
To begin with, there are a lot of drawbacks related to using air travel first and foremost, increase air pollution day by day due to use regular new devices and also many kinds of resources such as Petrol diesel and other popular resources this all kind of resources have increased pollution and decrease Ozone layer and it abundant of element arise like cancer, skin problems, due to uses fuel resources. For instance, ample of celebrities and also businessmen using on the airline for their need and also for the short plays the government should take actions against using this mode.
Moreover, the predominant reason at travel consume oil but other modes of transportation are also causing pollution and using few will like many people use private cars and also encouraging people to use public transportation could help save the global environmental problems and resources not only the resources but also many people are not affordable expensive travel.
However, there are also a few benefits to using air travel. firstly, international tourism has increased the economy of the world they are paid off for the tourist. moreover, many nations are earning from tourism, and also a lot of people are employed in this business they create new advanced market and pay handsome salary, and also at traveling cheap airfare makes it possible for people the world over travel regularly with used new technology.
In the capitulation, I certainly believe that immensely using air traveling it has ideas for the global pollution and also them's the world but also some benefit for using this traveling mode and anywhere with help of new technology and our time consuming
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, thus, while, as for, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2095959596 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73677552885 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.873445995 49.4020404114 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.222222222 106.682146367 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224804687827 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109344955327 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527467971198 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122154180593 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788552622501 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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