There is a controversial problem is still under debate among parents about whether should we allow children to make their own choices on everyday matters or not. According to some people, children should be allowed to decide what they should eat, wear or watch. However, others believe that if children have the freedom to make their own choices, they will grow up into selfish individuals. In my opinion, children definitely have the right to make their own choices on everyday matters, but since they are too young to know what is good or bad for them so parents should help them in making the right decisions.
Firstly, decisions making is a really important skill for children to drive their life to success. The most important thing is they have to know how to make the right choice about their lifestyle and future career. When they can make their own choices, they will be able to learn how to take the responsibility for their things. Needless to say, dealing with problems as a child can turn them into a problem-solving master in the future.
Secondly, when they have their own freedom, they might not consider the feeling of the others. For example, if the children want a new toy and their parents allow them to have their way all the way, they will not consider the economic situation of their parents. Then they will definitely grow into a selfish person who does not care for others. Therefore, the most important thing is parents have to set the limit of the freedom that the children can have.
In conclusion, in order to prevent children from being selfish, i believe that parents should teach them how to respect the feelings of others instead of prohibiting them from making their own choice about their lifestyles because they have right to do it.
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- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 67
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- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to prevent children from being selfish, i believe that parents should teach them ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41489481848 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483766233766 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4820549287 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284515791287 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124620570763 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738021739553 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20309003152 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537413826037 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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