Children and the world around them are one the most discussed subject among the parents and people who are in touch with kids. It is an argued question whether people should assume an autonomous characteristic for their kids making decision or this point of view will result to a selfish society in future. This essay will discuss both sides of this matter.
On the one hand, it is clear that children are exposed to some different range of dangers because they can not always understand what is better for them or what kind of things they should prevent. For instance, playing with computer game is an important matter in every families nowadays; if children have not been controlled, they can be affected by serious damages only because of choosing the games which were out of their ages range. Furthermore, as the children may not think about any compensation that their choices and what kinds of side effects they have on the other people, they may do anything and this kind of behaviour will lead them to be selfish.
On the other hand, if they were allowed to make their own decisions, they would find their autonomous characteristic. In addition, the ability of leadership is another thing that kids will gain if parents let them to choose and deal with the issues. They can learn from their mistakes and try not to do them again. Finally, kids must know about the panalties which could affect them because of their choices. For example, if the child himself does not experience the worse of something because of parents who prevented him, his curiousity will remain until he experiences it himself.
All in all, although it would be safer to over care about children, in my opinion it is better to let them make their own decisions even if it is hard for parents to do such thing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, may, so, another thing, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73248407643 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42427611675 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554140127389 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.183378688 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213929347325 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800420640118 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574154312934 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133851365889 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147919290371 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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