Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choice on everyday matters (such as food,clothes and entertainment) is likely result in a society of individual who only think about their own whishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decesion about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In modern era, young generation are likely to taking decision of own life and do not like any interference of others.some individual believe that, it is optimistic development towards the children growth because they are taking own decisions while others think that young ones take decision according to particular situation. My both side views and opinion are justify further.
Nowadays, children's are more mature than
Past generation and they should obtain the solution of the problem.youngsters who takes the own verdict become more successful and intelligent in future because they all are fully independent and leaned how to survive in critical situation of life.Second thing is, children's who have permission from parents to do everything in life, consequently they are understand their guardians as well good attachment with them.
On the contrary, parents should gives the permission to take decision on the basis of children's demand because sometime youngsters misuse the relaxation which given by the parents. Moreover,sometime its required due to the incapability of child who have not take own verdict because of short term thinking and immaturity.For instance,children who studying in school are demand for particular thing due to watching the other students so it is inappropriate for both children and parents.
To conclude that, in current time youngsters are more mature so they should taking own decisions of their life however they should think before the making any decision which directly affect their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49789029536 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07182848639 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.648962513 49.4020404114 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.166666667 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1666666667 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173628256575 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810441993089 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543318579213 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951548349641 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355412254897 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.0946893788 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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