According to some people, children should be allowed to make their own decisions about daily matters like deciding what they should eat, wear and watch. However, others opine that if chidren have the liberty to make their own decisions, they will grow up into selfish individuals. In my opinion, children should have the freedom to make their own decisions because advantages of this liberty outweigh the disadvantages. This essay discusses both views .
On the one hand, it is very important for cildren to make decisions on their own because it is needed for children to increase their self confidence. Making decisions will make them more mature in life because they will be able to take responsibilities and make decisions. To exemplify, a child who takes small decisions at young age can deal with the conflicts and challenges more effectively than the one who have not made decisions in his/her childhood in the future. Therefore, they will be much happier in the future because they will gain experience by making mistakes.
On the other hand, many people insist that letting children to make their own decisions will make them stubborn. This will make things worse for themselves by literally never giving up or letting go of anything. For example, children will try to show and prove themselves to their parents how they make logical decisions even though their decisions are full with errors.People believe that this tendency will force them not to care others and cause to think only themselves like selfish.
In conclusion, I believe that cildren shoud be permitted to make their own decisions but parents should teach them to respect the feelings of others, otherwise they may end up becoming selfish.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10247349823 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62287784633 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9257187171 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272084976087 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116627900163 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854491227893 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181600963634 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600998513118 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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