Some people believe that to become the vegetarian is the only way to keep healthy. Do you agree or disagree?
The idea that becoming a vegetarian is the only method to achieve a healthy life style still remains a
source of controversy. In my opinion, although vegetables and fruits play a vital role in daily diet, this
is unnecessary to totally become a vegetarian.
On the one hand, there is a wide range of reasons why people should make a habit of consuming a
certain amount of vegetables and fruits everyday. First, plant-based eating, less visible than it is,
might help in preventing a certain type of chronic illnesses like heart failure, stroke or obesity which
is the result from imbalances diet with high amount of fat and glucose. Moreover, research has
shown that not only can offer a sufficient amount of nutrition, vegetarian diet but also give
people a certain side benefits. Fibre from vegetables, fruits and whole grains can improve the
metabolism, wide variety of vitamins and minerals have been proved to give a huge contribution to
control people's weight and stress, prevent dehydration and bright up their skin. Therefore, it is
undeniable that plant-based foods and diet can significantly enhance society's health.
On the other hand, some advocating vegetarianism are ignorant the fact that it is unnecessary to
give up animal-based foods completely to achieve a healthy life style. It should be acknowledged the
fact that, vegetarian suffer a higher rate of encountering a certain degree of mental problems such
as depression or anxiety, which can be considered as a result from nutritional deficiency. According
to studies, iodine, zinc and vitamin B12 might not be adequately provided when people leave
animal-based foods out of their meals.
In addition, if everyone became committed vegetarian, there would be serious drawbacks for
millions of people. For instance, suddenly transformational process can insert a great deal of
negative impact on livestock industries and carnivorous careers, resulting in wide range
unemployment and unexpected financial detriment. Therefore, the key for a decent life style is
keeping a balance diet rather than strictly following vegetarianism.
All things considering, I strongly believe that, despite multiple benefits brought from vegetarian
diet, it is unnecessary to entirely given up meats.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...certain amount of vegetables and fruits everyday. First, plant-based eating, less visibl...
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Line 10, column 23, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...et but also give people a certain side benefits. Fibre from vegetables, fruits and whol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50991501416 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0591831763 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611898016997 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4938883538 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.928571429 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134989096739 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478951731831 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392009261611 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0367052354025 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482721365046 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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