Some people believe that to become the vegetarian is the only way to keep healthy Do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that to become the vegetarian is the only way to keep healthy. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, it can be noticed that the awareness of a healthier lifestyle has been making various people alter their dietary habits, including the rising number of individuals enhancing vegetarianism. To a certain extent, I agree that consuming fruits and vegetables may be an effective method in terms of declining some hazardous diseases. However, I believe that it is not the only strategy to keep healthy.

On the one hand, the idea of following a vegetarian diet as an approach to becoming healthy is attractive for several reasons. First, an eating legume regime may minimize the chances of causing numerous toxic ailments such as stroke, diabetes, obesity, and cancer. This might be explained by the fact that non-vegetarians usually experience an extremely high level of blood sugar and are hence easily affected by these diseases. Fortunately, this can be avoided if non-vegetarians switch to a healthy diet. In fact, plant foods are supposed to be lowered in fat, sodium, and cholesterol, which can have a positive impact on a person’s blood pressure whilst keeping blood sugar levels steady. This diet may help them prevent type 2 diabetes by reducing their cholesterol and overall risk of heart attack, as well as toxins and chemicals building up in their bodies accordingly. Therefore, individuals who follow a legume-consuming diet are less likely to die or be hospitalized, thereby facilitating a longer lifespan. To illustrate, according to the European Prospective Investigation into Cancer and Nutrition-Oxford cohort study, vegetarians had a 30% lower risk of ischemic heart disease than those who did not follow a plant diet, and their lifespan may be more than 33% longer than those who consumed the meat and daily products. Furthermore, a consuming plant regime can save a good amount of money. It is true that in this day and age, animal proteins tend to be the most expensive item on the plate in a plethora of supermarkets. On the contrary, fruits and plants can be twice as cheap as meat. Thus, consumers likely prefer to opt for products made from plants rather than animal ones. As an illustration, researchers in the Department of Food Safety directly under the Ministry of Health of Vietnam demonstrated that a vegetarian diet could save about 18 million Vietnamese Dong.

On the other hand, I believe that a plant-eating regime is not the one and only adequate method. Instead of becoming vegetarian, there are various measures that could be adopted to manage a healthy lifestyle. The first and most efficient approach is to accelerate time for doing physical activities or playing several sports, such as football or athletics. It is true that physical activity can not only reduce the risk of developing a chronic disease such as obesity but can also strengthen individual bones and muscles. For clarification, according to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, doing 120 minutes a week of aerobic physical activity can help promote bone growth and strength and reduce the risk of fall-related injuries and fractures. As a result, this solution can help people improve their ability to handle pain and build a strong body base. Additionally, each person needs to achieve a balance between work or study and other activities in their lives. As an example, almost all employees now spend 10 or 11 hours per day at work, and students typically devote 12 hours per day to studying. Because of these hectic schedules, their mental health may be seriously affected and they may suffer from some syndromes like depression and anxiety. To tackle this phenomenon, working and studying schedules should be limited and they may participate in various social activities such as dancing or playing some sports. It will help to release stress and provide energy to the body.

In summary, it can be seen that a vegetarian diet may exert many advantages on people's health and on an economic level. Nevertheless, I conclude that regular sports activities and reasonable daily routines play an indispensable role in providing great health and continuing a healthy lifestyle.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, in fact, in summary, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 36.0 10.4138276553 346% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3446.0 1615.20841683 213% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 670.0 315.596192385 212% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14328358209 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.08766726615 4.20363070211 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93498421179 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 366.0 176.041082164 208% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546268656716 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1085.4 506.74238477 214% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0539676854 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.827586207 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1034482759 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72413793103 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142517068333 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415408771295 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504932554268 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987554411718 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321297011263 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 195.0 78.4519038076 249% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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