Some people believe that the best way to improve the general well being of schoolchildren is to make physical education compulsory in all school Others however think that this would have a little effect on overall health and that other measures are needed

Essay topics:

Some people believe that the best way to improve the general well-being of schoolchildren is to make physical education compulsory in all school. Others, however, think that this would have a little effect on overall health and that other measures are needed.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a growing tendency nowadays for people to suffer from serious illness as they have worse physical health. Some people believe that PE should be an obligatory subject in over schools. However, some others think that the good health depends on a huge amount of factors. In this essay, I will discuss both views and my personal opinion will also be given.

My first consideration is that the good health plays a pivotal role in our lives, so it had better enhance every day as a must. For example, when children usually do exercise, they will not only keep fit but also prevent themselves from serious diseases. Although not willing to do exercise for the first time, they will get great habit after practicing for a long time. In addition, the good health effects on our mental life. Particularly, by doing exercise regularly, this will help children to reduce tremendous stress after hard-learning.

On the other hand, PE in brick and mortar school also less important in solving the health problems of students. Firstly, it depends on their diet. For instance, some pupils supply a lot of fast foods such as fried chicken, hamburger or even fried sausages including cholesterol and fat lipid. These less nutritious foods may lead them to suffer a serious heart attack. However, schools had better provide some course teaching students the ways to protect their health and offer foods with various recipes, by doing this they can avoid children from junk foods around their school.

All in all, I put more weight on providing PE course in school because of its benefits. However, the government had better raise taxes on fast food in order to help young generation to have the good lifestyle.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9169550173 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44914756086 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3190078079 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184265894676 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602997062625 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536065315593 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118195001953 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698089935463 0.056905535591 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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