Some people believe bicycle have a lot of advantages, while others believe bicycle have more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Ever since before, bicycle was a part of our lives. However, many people argued that bicycle makes life easy and healthy, while others oppose that two wheeler has many disadvantages. In my opinion I believe, bicycle give us plethora of positive things not only to the people but also to this environment.
On the one hand, it is argued by some one that bicycle often take time consuming, feeling tiredness, and so on. In brief, people who prefer to use bicycle as a medium for transportation would be late at the actual time very often in school and office. At once, bicycle travelers must go early than other vehicles like car bus or train because, which need long time to ride self without support of machines. Secondly, cycle riders must have enough stamina and become energetic always to get rid of tiredness and fatigue during office hours or school time. Otherwise, that would be affect to their performance as a whole like being late at boarding time and missing an interview by excessive stress related to long cycle ride.
On the other hand, bicycle ride is often considered as an exercise by many such as, fixed time pattern for cycling may lead to build up body muscles and being away from many diseases. While, exercising by cycle reduce fat and cholesterol and may have less chance to become cardiac problem and diabetes. Secondly, bicycle usage has another benefit such as they mitigate environmental pollution in contrast to other method of transportation which use natural resources like coal, gas and oil. For instance, one of the main city in mexico which is avoided heavy vehicles in once in a week establish the lower rate of air pollution by means of bicycle mode of transportation.
To sum up, in my perspective, nevertheless, there are some draw back in terms of time and tide, positive aspect of bicycle reached at the peak overall. Moreover, make use of cycling helps to be healthy and young so, people would have longevity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in brief, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83035714286 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59167069963 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610119047619 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7334580291 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.928571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3571428571 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216143777191 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776587010161 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396981469449 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143379193769 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503789623743 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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