Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree.?
Sugar contents are indeed high in most manufactured food and drink products which may lead to major health issues. Because the high cost of such products would be beneficial to reducing the sugar consumption of many. It is good to reduce sugar usage but I disagree to be expensive for those items because there are many other productive ways to control sugars.
On the one hand, people who argued about being expensive manufactured food and drink items would decrease sugar usage might think the cost has the main concern of sugar consumption. In other words, the cost would not be the main reason for excessive intake of sugar, in contrast, the taste and temptation of such items are the main things. For instance, some other manufactured products like nutritious nuts and cereals are lower money than sugary, which contain higher nutritional values though people tend to buy sugar products.
On the other hand, proper awareness about nutritional products and the nutritive value of foods and drinks may mitigate the overconsumption of sugars. Similarly, improving the public knowledge regarding health hazards and illustrating the examples of consequences also decrease the number of manufactured sugar items. Ultimately people who do not have enough information about sugar problems would also buy products even if it is high cost. Excessive price only beneficial to the government and companies rather than the exact achievement of consumers.
To conclude, high levels of sugar contents always make dangers to health. Nevertheless, increase the prices would not be a valid solution to tackle this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... which may lead to major health issues. Because the high cost of such products would be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, similarly, so, for instance, in contrast, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29961089494 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73510135486 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7222114222 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37807480687 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142131608587 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789662039601 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234170364787 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780797822866 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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