Some people believe that children's success in adulthood is related to the way they have been raised by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?Give your own opinion and examples.
Education is the key to unlock the golden door of happiness for everyone in this competitive era of modernisation. Presently ,some masses assert that parents play a gigantic role behind their children's successful lives. Consequently, juveniles reached the peak level of achievement in their future life. Here,I would like to accord with the demonstrates statement.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, under the great guidance of parents adolescents get an opportunity in order to become success in their lives. To elaborate, most of juveniles are sent to sovereign school by their guardians where they get excellent academic skills. As a result,it is a capital idea to connect with several opportunities such as teachers,doctors,scientists and engineers. What is more,off suffering can attain a great deal of knowledge related to past history and culture of their family and nation from their parents.
Further emphasizing on my point of view,parents play a paramount role in the overall development of their juveniles so that,they may become a innocent member of the society and social culture on this earth likes haven. To justify, parents provide social,moral and cultural values which make them successed in their future career. Therefore,they become social animal. Apart from that,several national and international scientist's and sports person give credit to their parents to make them the onwer of success. Taking a real example in this phenomenon,kalapna chawla was a prominent scientist who went on space shuttle columbia in 1997. She had given the credit of their success to their guardian who supported to her socially,emotionally and financially. Consequently,it is universally acknowledged that,parents set the pillor of successful career of their adolescents in this competitive era.On the contrary others have conflicting view.
On the other hand,initially,some masses did not get support from their parents but they accomplished their aspirations by their doing hard work and extrat ordairnery talent. One more real life example,my friend roashan Nain is a perfect example,he got the job of a teacher in government school by their own efforts. Last but not least,some parents can not provide support due to,illiterate and poorness.
To recapitalisation,it is well said that,children are the future of a nation. Thus,juveniles must do their efforts in order to get a big achievement in their lives. However,we can not underestimate the importance of parents way which is used to raised their children's.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, such as, as a result, on the contrary, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2176.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52284263959 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50068000447 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581218274112 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9429216637 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9090909091 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95454545455 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184844329973 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529311459605 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040326808447 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107208748324 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185326574476 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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