Some people believe that children's time outside of school should be filled with scheduled activities such as art and music classes and sport. Others feel that children need free time to play and relax.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Children's daily schedules include academics and other extracurricular activities. While many people think that their free
time should be spent playing and relaxing, others are of the school of thought that out of school period should be
scheduled for activities such as art and music classes and sport. They shouldn't be left to waste any precious time
anyway!
When children engage in schedule activities like art, music and sport, their knowledge is enhanced. moreover, they
have opportunity to learn new things outside their regular academic activities and at the same time gain some sets of
skills . children have affinity for new things and adventurous in nature therefore, having ability to grasp at that tender
age. For example, I was so much in love with music during my childhood days. my curiosity in those days, built that
eagerness in me to learn music. Also, the opportunities available at my disposal made me gain drumming skill which
wouldn't have been possible if I was confined to only academic activities.
Nonetheless, children are always bored and tired when packed with to many activities without any scheduled time for
playing and relaxing. This is because their psychological makeup does not allow all work without play. For example, in
July1970, Sah H'am; a psychologist discovered that 60% of children whose daily activities do not include relaxation get
bored and tired easily. Also, the government of India in 2009, banned out of school activities for children because of its
adverse effect n them.
Finally, while many people think that children's free time should be spent playing and relaxing, I'm of the opinion that
they should have scheduled out of school activities for art and music classes and sport which will potentially enhance
their knowledge and give them some sets of skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24745762712 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63941959388 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552542372881 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.084576153 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.076923077 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389813001944 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135667222476 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122878966296 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121808475548 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925322503556 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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