It is true that with the thrive of technology, smart phones have become an essential item for every one daily lives. But there are people children from using their devices during weekdays, while others encourage youngster to use their phones. In my opinion, children should be able to use their smart phones.
On one hand, many parents concern that their children might get distracted in school when they are allowed to use smart phones in class. Applications in portable devices can be attractive for children, since they are designed to lure user in so that they can spent as much time inside application as possible. This in turns could distract children from teacher lectures and could heavily impact the student grades. For instance, games on mobile phones are very attractive for many youngsters around the world, video games were designed to trigger dopamine in human brain instantly and forcing them to play for longer.
On the other hand, letting children use their phones can be a benificial thing. Firstly, the youth can use their phones for research purposes, many information nowadays are stored online and can be easily access through a devices that is connected to the internet. Secondly, able to contact parents and family members when emergency happens. For instance, if a student forgot their important essay, they could use their phones to ask their parent to bring the essay to them. Finally, good way to past the times, mobile games can help children pass the time without having to leave the house.
In conclusion, mobile phones are essential for everyone daily lives some does not want their children to get distracted in school with phones while others allowed and encouraged them to use them. And in my opinion, I agree we should allow children to use their phones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
It is true that with the thrive of technology, smart phones have become...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...signed to lure user in so that they can spent as much time inside application as poss...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...use their phones for research purposes, many information nowadays are stored online ...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...use their phones for research purposes, many information nowadays are stored online and can be e...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a device' or simply 'devices'?
Suggestion: a device; devices
...online and can be easily access through a devices that is connected to the internet. Seco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36186367092 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8623745812 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378919876947 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157907652439 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107420423752 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273588080158 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676480355345 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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