Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...health as they fill more relax and calm.If they spend all the time in their educat...
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...ch day for an hour will make them relax.It will divert their mind in different spo...
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...ld to have a career in it. Secondly,spending time with art and painting will provide...
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...l calmness as burden of studies is more.The time will be used by making master piec...
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...aking master piece of paintings and art.Art will give different idea to them and ex...
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...f arts and paintings. In conclusion,I would say that spending time only in st...
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...ctivities will not help students instead free time should be utilized by differen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24778761062 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80139868627 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.134834633 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.5 106.682146367 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.5 20.7667163134 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177026132855 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124235669328 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534847455632 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124235669328 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534847455632 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.0946893788 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.1 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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