It is obvious that developing the world is because of science progress and science development is borne due to computer's help.although some people hold a view that computers are as an obstacle than their assessment.by some reason i refuse this point of view that computers are backwardness.
First of all,i would mention that computers have efficacious role in science development.by using such friendly devices,scientists are able to solve most of complicated equations.for instance,for many years scintists had spent a lot of time on finding solution but with the advent of new technologies such as highly speed computers and super computer,they are able to solve most sophisticated problems just in a jiffy.moreover,computers enhance our ability to design and make many kinds of enormous tools and equipment which are useful in engineering and medical science.
the next clear reason is because of facilitating our daily life in modern world.as you know computers are applied in many filds such as banking,education,public transportation,subways and airplaine controling and so forth.no one can cast a shadow of doubt on this fact that without computers most of the above tasks would go wrong and we must thanks to computers and new technologies for their merits.
In conclusion,it is not deniable that computers have some dismerits but it is obviously clear that their benefits outweigh than their disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48181818182 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77421657352 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604545454545 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.774836456 49.4020404114 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 301.5 106.682146367 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.0 20.7667163134 265% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06120827912 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220380879024 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126628555102 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029660092347 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126628555102 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029660092347 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.9 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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