Some people believe cycling is more crucial for people’s health, than driving, do you agree or disagree
To meet healthy necessity in life, some people believe that cycling is one of beneficial activities, while others claim that driving has negative effect for human life. I totally agree with this statement because cycling is activity may prevent to obesity rather than driving is passive activity can improve stressful affecting to heart disease.
Using a bike is one important exercise helping people to improve their healthy condition. Riding is believed that might decline body weight particularly they suffering obesity disease. Based on expert of medical research that cycling can burn calories about 1200 kilojoules or approximately 300 calories per hour. If people do cycling activity routine in a week, they may reduce much kilojoules of calories compare to driving only sitting on the car without moving or standing activity which can burn fat.
Furthermore, activity such as driving is known well to get more quickly in people’s journey. But this does not mean exercise. While driving, human body is just sitting on the car. Instead this can increase stressful affecting to chronicle ill such as heart disease. British researcher, Ding said that there are some evidences that sitting hurts human body’s ability to burn fat. For example, a half people in USA who drive to go to work suffer to heart disease compare to they work as a farmer using bicycle to go to field. This fact show that is more risk to people health.
In conclusion, I believe that cycling is more beneficial exercise for human health improvement than driving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'shows'.
Suggestion: shows
...using bicycle to go to field. This fact show that is more risk to people health. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60296892335 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4707500719 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304126685994 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100483886092 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875056776406 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206345971585 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711658752362 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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