some people believe that the e books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often believed by some that the paper based novels are disappearing with the creation of electronic books, while others assert that the e books can not replace the paper books.In this essay, I shall discuss both perspectives with a lucid conclusion.
To begin with, online journals are easily available nowadays due to the technological advancements. People can buy electronic books and keep store it in their smartphones. Also, they can use it to read at any time even while travelling in trains etcetera as it is easy to carry compared to paper articles.To examplify, the masses of developed nation such as united states use only electric books to escalate their knowledge rather than books made of paper.
On the paradoxical side, others argued that the real books would never be extinct due to plethora of reasons.The preponderant one is the reliable information given by authors which is however may be fake on internet. Furthermore, the books made by papers are easy to read as it does not put any stress and stain on eyes. The important and key points can be highlighted on books with the use of multiple highlighters. Additionally, the older aged prefer to read only paper novels instead of e books as they do not feel comfortable to use electric appliances. In this way, they can stay away from the diseases caused by the harmful radiation emitted by computers or mobile phones.
In conclusion, my personal view is that the use paper books would be limited in future but it could not be properly replaced by electric books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88593155894 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78459421218 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5660836903 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34147806344 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127863653699 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837410272722 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214459940574 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533435658671 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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