Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher while others feel an excellent teacher cannot be made by pursuing a course. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
It is often believed that anyone can become an educator only by engaging in course, however, others asserted that only courses are not enough for becoming an effective teachers, some others factors also contribute such as workshops, seminars and teaching trainings.
To begin with, education is the most powerful weapon to change the world and only teachers can impart knowledge to the youngsters. So, if anyone have strong desire to be an instructor, need to enrol in their interested course. To illustrate, for becoming a science teacher, the person may choose medical or non medical courses. As courses provide depth knowledge to the pupil to become mastered in their subject and make them eligible to choose teaching profession. Hence, courses plays an important role for the development of becoming teachers.
On the contrary, many people claim that some other factors also be considered for becoming an excellent teacher. such as teaching training, where the educators learn that how to teach the students while understanding their interest, abilities and capabilities. Moreover, the workshops and seminars by which the teachers learn that how to understand the psychology of the pupil. As well as the teaching strategies namely four corner method, gradual release responsibility model, quiz quiz trade that are helpful to arouse the curiosity of the students and engage themselves in class.
In conclusion, I believe that only courses cannot make the effective instructors but the others approaches such as workshop, seminars and teaching training methods are much more effective to raise the teaching level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'teacher'?
Suggestion: teacher
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shops, seminars and teaching trainings. To begin with, education is the most pow...
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Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...wledge to the youngsters. So, if anyone have strong desire to be an instructor, need...
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Line 4, column 446, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...ubject and make them eligible to choose teaching profession. Hence, courses plays an imp...
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Suggestion: Such
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Suggestion: quiz
..., gradual release responsibility model, quiz quiz trade that are helpful to arouse the cu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tudents and engage themselves in class. In conclusion, I believe that only cours...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43873517787 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77860833541 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5063841165 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212937513858 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833052432724 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630180578432 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128667857973 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305962140672 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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