Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company, while others say young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that the success of any business is based on how well the employees contribute to the company. Some people think that the mature workers can bring about a reap of benefits, while others believe that freshers are more valuable than their older counterparts. However, the functions of labor force that is different age group have their own advantages.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why elderly workers play an important role for the development of the firm. Firstly, these employees gain in depth knowledge and great experience at their workplace, so they completely understand how the system operates. It means that they can make accurate decisions or instantly estimate the risk according to their specialist knowledge. Secondly, the older experienced staff is able to mentor the younger generations through mentorship programs. One example for this view is that inexperienced employees are trained how to nurture their soft skills such as team management or dealing with conflicts during their probationary periods.
On the other hand, the growth of industries significantly depends on the major contribution of younger workforce. One reason is that freshers easily adapt to the changes by bringing new ideas and perspectives to the workplace. Particularly, these forces are always eager and willing to learn to promote themselves. Another reason is that young employees are likely fluent multiple languages, which can facilitate their work in global companies. For instance, the contracts from multilingual people-direct salesmen will make tremendous profits for the worldwide companies thanks to their negotiation.
In conclusion, it seems evident that the functions of experienced workers are as fairly important as that of novice employees at the workplace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...that the mature workers can bring about a reap of benefits, while others believe that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51086956522 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9566349616 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1023193525 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157185386846 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457511810919 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462502134404 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948224640393 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360404761084 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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