Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on the society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
time and time again, the possible aspectshave been emerging out clearlyand stronger in terms of putting forth the fact that entertainers plays a vital role in daily life to get relaxed and serene from the daily busy life.
many commentators are of view that they credited to be earn more wheras otherts feel that the payment should be relatively less as they have negative effects on society.
Influenced by and also acknowledging a pattern of miscellaneous opinion and perspective, i potentially reckon that why they should be praiseworthy to get more.
there is a cliche that states comedians should be highly payable and this troupe has some credence. The entertainers write the scripts by their own and invest time and money in making the whole drama or show just to make people laugh. various scientific researches has shown the good, beneficial and healthy effects of laughing on human health. evidences explains that how inevitably the hormones gets released from the body and provides relaxation to the brain which inturn effects on the physical health of human body. In this contemporary era the eminent personality in the entertaiment world is Kapil sharma who telecasts his sho ws on sony television. He is a highly talented comedian and his spontaneously replying habit makes him superior when compared with other comedians. His programmes are full of drama and comedy and viewers feel ecstatic and serene after watching his drama. His makings are totally boon for the elderly people as it connects them with the outside world. According to some people who believes that they are causing ill effects on society might be quiet true however these are addictive in nature beacause of that some youger generation people such as kids and college going boys may get addict to these productions and will invest their time in watching these rather on their studies. I personally believe that they should be paid more for theis worthy effects on society.
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- Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on the society is negative while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others Discuss both views and give your opinion 95
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07716049383 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65310588036 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614197530864 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4818149426 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229470296731 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690901874489 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639322016183 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105253225265 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074504649108 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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