Some people believe that family members are important than friends.Do you agree or disagree?
In fact, family plays vital role in every person life and it ia who masses are love.The family is something that influnce each and everyone for us.There few number of people think that family is necessary part of human life than colleagues.However,I m tottaly agree with the statement and I will delve my point of views in my upcoming pharagraphs.
To commence with,there are various perspective about family.Firstly,the family is the first stage of our life and people are learn many things or activities from their family members like they learn to talk,walk,eat and others at home.Moreover,parents are complete do our all requirments while our study or school time they give to us money.Also,the persons of family are very helpful for their kige because they can do suppourt to them at everywhere in everytime for everything.
Probing further,it is a strong relationship among parents and children due to blood relation.Therefore the tribe is true for their infant because they do not cheat with them.The part of family is always understandable for their kids also they never hust them.Furthermore,the father mother or any member of family is often neglect to babies weakness they do not feel bad or think evil for individuals.Even they are become capable them achieve for success in the life.
To conclude,both are benificial for us but family is best part of our life.people should not live alone from the family they should always live with them because there is no body else your without parents them youngsters give should respect to their elder persons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11673151751 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30000548261 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5953307393 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.6256170641 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 328.75 106.682146367 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.25 20.7667163134 309% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153130876216 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100160108569 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282724422607 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100160108569 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282724422607 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 13.0946893788 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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