Polygamy has lead ro massibe divorce rate arround the globe.Give possible solutiom and discuss the reasons behind the issue?
Polygamy is defined as marriage when a man is married to more than one wife at a time.In some nations man has create to bad divorce worth in all the world.However,I will delve my point of views in my upvomming pharagraphs.
To commence with,there are numrous kinds of pros and cons.First of all,some men are prefer to young and pretty wives than others but man is neglect to his wife when she have an old age.Then women should become well educated so that she can know about the rule and regulations.Moreover,girls should to learn new things regarding the marriage life and she can select better life partner for hers life.Also,she should protect from that persons who are give to women physically preference than her nature.
Probing further,there few masses has number of affairs with another females out at home.Due to.this problem their wige and offsprings have to face many difficulties in their childhood.so,government should to do make strict law on that persons eho are cheat with theri family.That is way the divorce rate can deciline in the world.Furthermore, the foremost matter is born to child because some girls cannot do produce baby due to their serious disease and in this case boys are want to get second wedlock.But women should to do more and more try for give the birth to kid.
To conclude,government should to do allow regin for married gents who make one to more relationships.Government should give punishmenr to them.Undoubtly,it would be prove better for the next genration and could be helpful an abolish break the marriage connection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02681992337 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51292316662 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.713893811 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.0 106.682146367 307% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.25 20.7667163134 314% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.25 7.06120827912 358% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0284727140763 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191559933193 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203745225806 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0191559933193 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203745225806 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.9 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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