Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that only challenging hobbies can bring people satisfactory feelings and attract them to continue doing. In my opinion, interesting hobbies do not have to be difficult because people have different needs.
On the one hand, some people think activities that challenge them make them excited when they are doing it. They can gain a sense of fulfilment because mastering in a difficult hobby is similar to learning a skill. For example, people enjoy doing scuba diving even though it might be fatal if they are not careful enough underwater. If an activity is easy to do without hard work or professional training, those who want to have a unique experience would feel bored. Easy hobbies are not attracting to keep doing and people may give up after a short period of time.
On the other hand, some activities can be pleasurable for various reasons and they do have to be difficult. First of all, more and more people having hobbies for relaxing purpose and they want to refresh themselves and escape from an increasingly stressful life. Taking reading books as an example, most people read fictions and novels in their free time because their brain can take a rest and do not need to work hard when they read those books. Also, some people have hobbies for health, and they would be happy if they can keep fit by doing their hobbies. For instance, Yoga is a very popular hobby for people in all age ranges due to the mental and physical pleasure it brings with.
In conclusion, people gain happiness from different things so as from hobbies. All the activities can be enjoyable no matter they are extremely challenging or no need to use your brain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ng and people may give up after a short period of time. On the other hand, some activities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76551724138 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48638623869 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2068989585 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288189451294 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116191540427 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073331118538 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195667001205 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365907823999 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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