Some people believe that huge amount of money and time is spent in protection of wild animals and that could be spend on protection of human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Governments across the world spending huge amount of money and resources to protect wildlife. Some people believe that efforts should be made to improve the quality of life of the human population instead. I disagree with this notion. Animals have equal rights to natural resources. Animals should be protected as they are an integral part of our ecosystem.
To begin with, Human civilisations have consumed most of the natural resources and spared very little for the wildlife. In the last few decades, many wild animals have extinct or declared as endangered species. Most of which is due to the shrinking of their natural habitat or excessive hunting. These damages were done by us that is exactly why we should be responsible to restore the balance.
Evidently, all the animal species are very important for the ecosystem. If one goes extinct, which breaks the food chain and could cause a detrimental effect on all the other systems. To cite an example, if birds thrive on insects removed from the system then these insects grow exponentially and can damage the crops of hundreds of acre.
Finally, humans are also part of this ecosystem if we do not put our efforts to save the aminals which are the important part of our environment, then this planet will become uninhabitable in very near future.
In conclusion, Animals in the ecosystem must be protected in order to protect the environment. They have the equals rights to live and use the resources of the mother earth as we do. Humans as prime species are responsible to save and protect all the wild animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98127340824 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63540570686 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1052813698 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.125 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239856677211 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773589076882 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079214137231 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131096530559 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111151962438 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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