Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days more and more people are involved in distinct leagues of employment. While, some people are of opinion that the people are disappointed with their jobs and low paying wage,other thinkthe patience and courage to pursue success is needed to overcome harsh period.I personally agree that the hard working pay off in future only if we focused on our work wisely.
It is certainly true that so many people are compell to do job without their satisfaction and low paid salary.
It's because one key to fulfill their basic needs is only that job. In addition, they just go with flow that their life take them and try to approach some happiness in that job. For instance, in middle class family, they are obliged to join those low wage job without interest only to persue healthy lifestyle. Hence by accepting their bad circumstance they live their life.
In contrast, other argued that we must have positive attitude to enhance the success over bad period. Firstly all the thing may not turn out the way we thought they would. So we must have patience to tolerate those bad things and motivate ourselves to look forward toward success by approaching appropriate hard work. Let illustrate by poor student, who aren't able to pay school fees. Inspite they tried to get scholarship by geeting good grade in examination. Lastly to get victory over work, one's
must be proactive to focosed on work.
In nutshell, its significant to maintain positive mindset to achieve a successful career. I also reckon that we mustn't give up our desired job. Despite accepting bad situation, we must have courage and power to achieve success in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , other
...nted with their jobs and low paying wage,other thinkthe patience and courage to pursue...
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Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...cess is needed to overcome harsh period.I personally agree that the hard working ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...eir satisfaction and low paid salary. Its because one key to fulfill their basic ...
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Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...erest only to persue healthy lifestyle. Hence by accepting their bad circumstance the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...rk. Let illustrate by poor student, who arent able to pay school fees. Inspite they t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Must
...Lastly to get victory over work, ones must be proactive to focosed on work. I...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: mustn't
...uccessful career. I also reckon that we mustnt give up our desired job. Despite accept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, look, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.925 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47687261666 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617857142857 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.4998566512 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128245853705 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416511842761 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310659428385 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595645028331 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310349362133 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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