There is an argument whether people should accept bad circumstances or striving to make the situation better. I completely agree with the latter view and will explain the reasons.
On the one side, accepting unwanted circumstances is good because it is a better reaction than complaining and grieving. This is because by accepting, people will learn to be thankful of what situation he faces now. By being thankful, people will feel happier and less prone to depression. For example, Bob works in a company where he gets unsatisfying wage. Instead of complaining, he chooses to accept it and becomes thankful that at least he has a job. However, accepting will not change bad situations into better circumstances.
On the other side, struggling is great because it will make bad conditions turn into better situations. This is because basically there is no effort that will not give positive outcome. For instance, John has just graduated from a university and he finds it difficult to get a job. Because he works hard to improve his skills and never gives up in applying to multiple companies, he finally can get out of his unemployment situation and get his dream job.
In conclusion, accepting bad situation is good because it is a better choice than complaining when reacting to a bad circumstances. However, because accepting will not help people to get out of unwanted circumstances, I completely agree that striving is better choice because it will make unwanted conditions turn into better situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10040160643 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97669750777 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506024096386 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6515701822 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7142857143 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190731411607 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788954837159 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626482263055 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140855344943 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309724651344 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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